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[FanFic] Fate Is Destiny - Chapter 10

Post by killupii on Sat Dec 26, 2009 7:05 am

lalalalala.. since it's holiday and i have nothing to do so i think i'll post this update~

just to refresh you memory (because i haven't updated this for a looooooooooooooooooooooong time, hahahaha)
in last chapters Tari, Dame-chan, and Rie-chan went to have a dinner with NEWS. there, they met Dy-chan. When they were about to go home, somehow Tari had to go home with yamapi, Dy-chan with Massu, and Rie-chan Dame-chan with other NEWS members in Ryo's car.

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“Errr, you can stop here. My house is not really far from here.” Dyana said.
“Let me chauffeur you back home. That’s okay. Erm, should I turn right?” Massu said as he drove the car slowly so that he wouldn’t miss the turn.
“Yes.” Dyana said slyly.

“By the way, I think I’m gonna go to your concert tomorrow.”
“Oh really?! Great! You’ve bought a ticket? I have some, you can have one if you want~” Massu suddenly turned so enthusiastic.
“Hahahaha, that’s okay. I’ve got one.” Dyana replied and took the ticket out of her purse. And then she showed it to Massu.
“Wow! That’s really cool! Hm, but I have the VVIP tickets. You don’t want to have it?” Massu offered her one more time.
“Nope. That’s okay, maybe next time, hehe. Because I got this ticket with my own endeavor.” Dyana proudly said.
“Hahahaha! Really? So how did you get it? Tell me.” Massu asked, smiling.

“Okay, first, I joined the NEWS fan club… And then I paid the ticket and waited for 2 weeks, waiting to know whether I’ll get the ticket or not. After two weeks an email was sent to me and it is said that fortunately, I got the seat! Hehehe!” Dyana explained.
“Wow! So you went through the regular procedure of ordering ticket?” Massu was amazed.
“Yeap. Cool, huh?” Dyana laughed.
“Actually I’ve been a member of NEWS fan club for quite a long time, but this is the first time I got the concert ticket! For me, this ticket is so precious and I don’t want to replace it with any other ticket! Hehehe, sorry!” she continued.
“ Well, okay then. I hope I can see you at the concert, hahaha!” Massu said.
“The spread of my beauty will lead you to where I am, hehehe. I will be easily distinguished among those thousands of fans!” Dyana joked.
Massu was silent for a moment, and then he replied,
“Maybe I will find you, though.. Hahahaha! Because of your beauty!”
Dyana smiled.
kimi no subete beautiful eyes… sekai juu de ichiban utsukushii… boku no yume no beautiful eyes, suki da… dakishimete… hanasanai…

Lalalalalala~ 84

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“Hahahaha!! That’s good, I know it’s a great idea to take our seats first and let her sit at the side~!” Shige laughed, blabbing about his own idea.
“Okay, I know you’re smart, Kato-san~” Dame-chan replied.
“Hahahaha!! Did you see how her face turned red?! And how Yamapi treated her? Stroked her head?! Oh, that’s so funny! I wonder what will those two do in the car~! Hahahaha!!” Ryo laughed as he drove the car in high-speed.
The others smiled and laughed. Some of them were wondering about what will happen to Dyana and Massu, and Tari and Yamapi.

“Nee, nee~ How about singing some songs? Since we’re new to each other, so why don’t we make the situation feels warmer?” said Tego.
“Yeah! Great idea! But you guys should also sing along with us, okay?” Keii-chan turned his body and looked at the backseat excitedly.
“But… Err, you guys are singer, and we’re not. I don’t think we can sing well..?” Dame-chan hesitantly said.
“No problem! Besides, this is not a concert; no matter how out-of-toned is your voice, just sing and nobody will care~!” Ryo replied.
“Hahahaha, well okay then.. But, what song are we going to sing?” Rie-chan asked.
“Hemmm, let’s see..” Tego put his index finger on his head as if he was thinking so hardly. The car was in silence for some minutes. Everyone was thinking about the song they’re going to sing together.

“Kimi Ga Yo!” Shige suddenly said. -- > 60
“What the heck?! Are we going to sing our country’s national song?! Hahahaha! I don’t think so!” Keii-chan laughed at his best buddy.
Shige -- > 35

“How about Arashi’s song?” Dame-chan asked.
“Hmmm… What song?” Ryo said.
“5x10!” Dame-chan replied and smiled.
“50!” Shige answered. -- > 60
Dame-chan -- > “EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEHHHH?!”
Others -- > 62
“Please forgive him…” -- > Keii-chan -- > 14
Shige -- > 35
5x10 is the title of an arashi’s song

“Errr.. Not Kimi Ga Yo nor 5x10... How about Jin’s Love Juice!?” Ryo suggested another song.
“What?! No, No, No… The lyrics are too ero to sing! It’s not a type of song which you can sing in front of girls~! That kind of song should only be sung when there’re only boys around us. Well, not boys though… guys! Hahahaha!” Shige rejected.

“So how about Tegoshi’s Ero Lyrics!? I think it will be interesting! Hahaha!!” Ryo offered another ero song.
Others -- > 10
“Too much ero-ness inside can make you wanna puke…” -- > 63
Tegoshi -- > 35

“I have one suggestion! Nantoka Narusa!” Tegoshi said.
“No, no. Both Massu and Yamapi are not here. I don’t want to sing their song without them..” Ryo said.
Keii-chan’s thought -- > hey, I’m here, and I also sing that song with them…
Ryo’s thought -- > but you only sing one couplet, right?
Keii-chan’s thought -- > yeah, but… yamapi only sings one couplet too!
Ryo’s thought -- > what?! We can communicate by using telepathy?
Keii-chan’s thought -- > EEEEEEEEEEEHHH?! Cool!
Keii-chan and Ryo -- > 1
“Why there’s a handy talkie in my hand?!”
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“They really did think that they could use telepathy?” Rie-chan said and shook her head in disappointment.

“So, what song are we going to sing?” a voice asked. It was Tegoshi. Everyone stopped their foolishness and started to think for another idea.

“Nantoka Narusa Koyama Keiichiro Pillow’s Stains Pacific Concert Behind The Scenes Version~!” Keii-chan yelled, suggesting another song. Not really another song, just another version of the previous song.
“The title is too long; we don’t wanna sing a too-long-titled song…” Shige said.
“Besides, it’s not a song. It’s more like a personal-grievance rather than a song. Hahahaha!” said Ryo.
Keii-chan -- > 9

“I know! I know!! I.ZA.NA.I.ZU.KI~!” Shige suggested another one.
“Eh? What song is it?????! I never heard of it…” Ryo asked in confusion.
“HEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!?! It’s our song~! What the heck?! You don’t know it?! Ryo, you’re such a TRAITOR! Being a member of both NEWS and Kanjani8 doesn’t mean you can forget one of our song!!” Shige protested.
Ryo didn’t bother Shige’s sayings. He kept driving the car innocently.
“You still don’t remember the song?” Keii-chan asked him.
Ryo shook his head.
“Errr… Nishikido-san… It’s the song where Kato-san sings ‘kuchizuke wo~’…” Rie-chan tried to remind him.
“AH! KUCHIZUKE WO! Hahahahahaha!!! KUCHIZUKE WO SONG!!! KUCHIZUKE WO SONG!!!!!” Ryo suddenly shouted happily. With his BIG shining smile.
“Of course I know it!!!! Hahahahahaha!!! get away, tsukiyou ni kakurete be silent… dare ni mo ozorezuni shinjite too far…” Ryo started singing the song.
The others followed him and also started to sing I.ZA.NA.I.ZU.KI.
Shige -- > 68

***


“So, what song do you want to listen?” Yamapi asked.
“Erm, anything will do.” Tari answered.
“Okay, let’s see what I got in my cd player…” Yamapi said. He turned his cd player on and in no time a song could be heard from the speakers.
sexy lady come and talk to me, you’re the finest girl… let’s make love in this club through the night… sexy lady, bring your body here, I’ve been watching you… I like the way you move, let me make you numb…
Tari -- > 38
Yamapi -- > 1
“NNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO~!!”


***

“E… EHH! STOP STOP!!!” Dyana suddenly said.
“WHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!” Massu screamed and stopped his car right away.
“What’s wrong?! Did I run over a xiao long bao?”
Dyana -- > 31
“Why were you screaming?” she asked.
“Ah.. Hahaha.. I thought we’re gonna hit something..” Massu said. -- > 35
Dyana -- > 31

“Hahahaha, of course no. Hm, I think I should go out. This is my apartment.” Dyana said as she pointed a small apartment right beside the car.
“Wanna come in for a while?” Dyana offered.
“Erm, I think not now. I have to go home fast and get some rest.” Massu smiled.
“Okay. Anyway, thanks so much for the ride.” Dyana smiled.
“Ah, and ganbatte for your concert! Don’t forget to look for me, I’ll be there! Search for the most beautiful one among all the audiences! Hahahahaha!” She added.
“No problem! Hahahaha! Erm, let me open the door for you.” Massu said and went out of the car. He went to the other side of it and opened the passenger’s door.

“Hahahaha, thanks! I feel like I’m a princess, haha! Next time, let me open the door myself, okay? Ah, and don’t forget to come by next time.” Dyana smiled again.
“Hahahaha! Okay, okay! Well, see you tomorrow!” Massu said and walked back to the car.

The car started to leave. Dyana waved at Massu and he waved back at her. Massu smiled as he saw the image of the girl he likes so much getting smaller and smaller on the rear view of the car.
“Hahahaha!! I feel like I’m in a dorama! And the text above really supported that kind of feeling!” Massu laughed.


***


“NNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO~~!!” Yamapi screamed.
“Hahahahaha!! Sorry, I accidentally played that kind of ero song in front of a girl like you, hahahaha! Sorry!” Yamapi blushed.
“Ah… Hahahaha! That’s okay, hahahaha! Besides, that song is cool, the lyrics doesn’t really matter. In fact, I like that kind of ero lyrics! Hahahaha!” Tari said.
Yamapi -- > “HEHH?!!”
“Eh?! Wh.. What?! I mean, besides, you have a good English!! Ha.. Ha.. Ha!” Tari continued. -- > 65
“Ahh, sou? Hahahaha! I don’t think my English is good, though.” Yamapi smiled.
“Well, to tell you the truth, when I first heard it, I didn’t think that it’s an English song! Hahaha! Err, sorry, I don’t mean to tease you, hehe.” Tari said.
“Ah, that’s okay! Besides, tegoshi’s English is worse you’re telling the truth and I like an honest girl like you, hahahaha!” Yamapi laughed.
Tari blushed.
“E.. Errr.. By the way, your ‘Nooooooo~’ really reminds me of ProDai!” Tari smiled.
“Ahahahaha! You’ve watched it?” Yamapi asked.
“Of course I have! I really like the drama, it’s so touching yet funny!” said Tari.
Yamapi smiled proudly.
“Well, I like that drama too, the story is great and we got a lot of good responses from the audience! That’s why we made the special…” Yamapi added.
“Oh really? I thought the special was already set at the first place! Ah, and you played with…”
“MASAMI!!!” Yamapi suddenly yelled her name out.
“Huh? Well, yeah, Masami-san.. Hahaha.. Errr, why were you so excited when saying her name?” Tari asked.
“MA.. MASAMI NAGASAWA!!” Yamapi didn’t answer her question.
“EH???”
“AH!!”
Tari finally realized that actually Yamapi was pointing at something… No, someone. Someone across the street. She’s such a beautiful lady and Tari knew exactly who she is.


***


yoyoyoyoyoyoooo~~
i'll update soon, hahahaha~

who's that beautiful lady across the street?

read the next chapter and you'll find out, ahahahahaha

comments and critics are highly appreciated~!! 53

thankyou everyone~

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Re: [FanFic] Fate Is Destiny - Chapter 10

Post by sweetheartzz on Sat Dec 26, 2009 5:11 pm

i've been a silent reader all along~ forgive me! 39

huhuhu! keep up the good work tari! it's a really good fic! don't be like me! who doesn't continue her fics!

i'll be waiting for the next chappie!

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Re: [FanFic] Fate Is Destiny - Chapter 10

Post by killupii on Sat Dec 26, 2009 6:05 pm

@nina :
ohh that's okay, ahahahaha 53
thankyou for your comment 34

btw, why dont you continue yours? they're so great you know? i love the way you chose the words and all. it's like a pro writer, ahahahaha 51 you're so good in english! 17

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Re: [FanFic] Fate Is Destiny - Chapter 10

Post by sweetheartzz on Sun Dec 27, 2009 10:14 am

@tari: haha! welcome! how come i don't continue? i don't really know! sometimes it's because of lack of ideas~ sometimes it's lazyness but i think i should start updating them again but it's been a looooooooooooooooooooooong time since i touched it

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Re: [FanFic] Fate Is Destiny - Chapter 10

Post by ryuki_yamanoo on Wed Dec 30, 2009 10:24 am

“Let me chauffeur you back home. That’s okay. Erm, should I turn right?”
Massu said as he drove the car slowly so that he wouldn’t miss the
turn.
“Yes.” Dyana said slyly.-->
shouldn't this mean shyly ? because slyly and shyly have big difference of meaning lols xDD

WHO'S THAT GIRL !?!?!??! WHOOOOOOO !?!?!!??

BTW ... WHERE'S MY DEAR KURA" ???? WHEEEERRRREE ????

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Re: [FanFic] Fate Is Destiny - Chapter 10

Post by killupii on Wed Dec 30, 2009 10:43 am

@ryuki :
aah~~! it's shyly, not slyly, ahahaha~!! gomen2~
kame, neee~? uhm he'll come someday~~ lalalalala~~

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Re: [FanFic] Fate Is Destiny - Chapter 10

Post by ryuki_yamanoo on Wed Dec 30, 2009 10:52 am

*pouts* want him soon~ *pouts* *puppy eyes*
btw who's that girl ???? is it me ??? ROFL !
*ryuki is going crazy*

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Re: [FanFic] Fate Is Destiny - Chapter 10

Post by killupii on Wed Dec 30, 2009 10:58 am

@ryuki :
wth!?!!!
hahahahaha XD
i think kame will appear in the next 3 chapters, ahahaha XD

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Re: [FanFic] Fate Is Destiny - Chapter 10

Post by risna on Wed Jan 06, 2010 4:58 am

waa~ finally i've read this chapter!! 84
lot of silly things inside!!! hahahahahaha.
esp the conversation in ryo's car. when i read it, i said "wth?!" many times!! haha. 51
ganbatte ne~!! though you're in 12th grade now, you have to continue this fic. 42
*but don't forget to study, haha 9 9

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